In some part of the world, the rate of divorce has increased dramatically over the past few decades. Explain possible reason for this problem and suggest some solution.
Globally couple divorce become
serious
issue Add an article
a serious
on
Change preposition
in
few
countries. It is believed by Correct article usage
a few
few
individuals that there Correct article usage
a few
is
Wrong verb form
has been
rise
Correct article usage
a rise
on
Change preposition
in
rate
of divorce cases Add an article
the rate
specially
in Replace the word
especially
previous
few years. Correct article usage
the previous
This
essay will discuss the main problem associated with this
and propose some solutions to alleviate it.
Reason
behind Add an article
The reason
this
cause is depleting work life
balance of working couples and gender equality. To explain it Add a hyphen
work-life
further
, around the world due to
rise
in Correct article usage
the rise
cost
of living, most Add an article
the cost
of
Change preposition
apply
families
both male and females start earning to run their life which ultimately affects their working hours
. People do overtime and part time
jobs for longer Add a hyphen
part-time
hours
. For example
, Recently United nations
Capitalize word
Nations
publish
Wrong verb form
published
report
Correct article usage
a report
stated
that couple separation doubled Wrong verb form
stating
than
the Change preposition
in
last
20 years due to
improper working hours
. Moreover
, gender equality also
contributed much on top of it. Most of the global companies hiring female
same as Fix the agreement mistake
females
male
, Fix the agreement mistake
males
caused
more Wrong verb form
causing
female’s
start working. Change preposition
female to
Hence
, couples unable
to spend time together.
Despite Add a missing verb
are unable
above
causes to tackle Correct article usage
the above
this
problem, there are plethora
of possible measures to overcome Add an article
a plethora
this
condition. One of
is for Change preposition
apply
healthy
family life of Correct article usage
the healthy
employee
, Fix the agreement mistake
employees
company
could consider Add an article
the company
a company
to provide
three Change the verb form
providing
days
off instead
of two days
. To elaborate it
more, Correct pronoun usage
apply
currently
most Add a comma
,currently
of
Change preposition
apply
the
companies globally have two Correct article usage
apply
days
off like Saturday and Sunday, families
returning late and Change preposition
with families
sometime
Fix the agreement mistake
sometimes
works
on Saturday Wrong verb form
working
due to
extra work. Which reduce
their spending time with their Correct subject-verb agreement
reduces
families
. In addition
, extra
day off helps couples to plan small Add an article
an extra
the extra
trip
to off from work. Fix the agreement mistake
trips
Hence
, It increase
their relationship bonding and reduces their conflicts. Change the verb form
increases
For instance
, Google, face-book
and Mirco-soft companies Correct your spelling
facebook
this
started with Correct pronoun usage
apply
three
Correct determiner usage
a
days
off option in USA
in order to support Correct article usage
the USA
families
.
In conclusion, Married people
separation can Change noun form
people's
reduce
by maintaining office Wrong verb form
be reduced
hours
and family hours
. The best solution to this
problem is to regulate an extra off on top of two
Correct determiner usage
a
days
weekend.Correct your spelling
two-day
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