You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. Include • Where you stayed • What the problems were • How they can fix your complaints

Dear Sir or Madam,
This
is Islam Mohamed, one of your
hotel
guests. I am writing
this
letter regarding many issues which I faced during my stay at the
hotel
from 21st June to 25th June.
To begin
with, I have stayed for 4 nights in room number 235 to attend the international medical conference with my company. Unfortunately, I had a bad experience with the facilities in my room.
Furthermore
, the air conditioner was in bad condition, the furniture was very old, and there was no hot water in the bathroom.
Therefore
, I phoned the receptionist to ask him to fix these issues, but I was not satisfied with his actions. Actually, if I had known that the service was going to be so bad, I would asked my
manger
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to hold the conference at another
hotel
.
Finally
, as you are a well-reputed
hotel
, I feel that the best course of action to deal with
this
is to fix these problems as soon as possible because my company is going to hold another conference next month. I look forward to hearing from you, and your prompt response in
this
matter is greatly appreciated. Faithfully yours, Islam Mohamed
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  • I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with...
  • ...which I encountered during my recent stay at...
  • The first issue was...
  • Additionally, I found that...
  • Moreover, the... was not up to standard.
  • I suggest that...
  • This experience has left me...
  • I hope you will address these concerns promptly by...
  • To improve your service, you could...
  • As a form of compensation, I would appreciate...
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