In many parts of the world, there is not enough food for everyone. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

The
shortage
of
food
is still a vexing conundrum for humankind. From my perspective,
this
problem was exacerbated by the current harvested
food
volume
that was inadequate for the global population expansion and the cultivated seasonal disruption by climate change.
This
conundrum not only requires a multifaceted approach but
also
the joint hand of almost all the governments in the
world
. Nowadays, the population explosion at an alarming rate has surpassed the
food
seasonal supply in the
world
, which led to global
food
crop instability and menaced global
food
security.
Additionally
, the current demographic expansion has led to the usage of more fossil fuels in domestic and industrial activities, which ultimately resulted in a dramatic change in the precipitation pattern and some extreme weather events,
such
as desertification, ocean expansion or more paramount storms.
Consequently
, these factors have disrupted more seasons in the
world
and generated a
food
shortage
in the
world
.
Furthermore
, some commercial traders have bought all the
food
crops
in the market to inflate the
food
price in the market, which helps them gain financial earnings based on the
shortage
of
food
.
This
alarming circumstance requires a comprehensive method and a wide range of solutions was consented to by almost all of the global citizens and their authorities.
Firstly
, the
government
could enhance the effectiveness and application of family planning in all nations by introducing more advanced contraceptive methods that were based on the advancement in the medical field.
Besides
, the
government
should propagate and raise awareness about the immediate challenges of the current demographic skyrocketing, which could stifle
this
expanding problem.
Secondly
, the
government
could improve the
food
crops
volume
by implicating supreme modern farming techniques with automobile machines for all farmlands
along with
replacing some inferior
crops
with genetically modified
food
products. By doing
this
, farmers not only harvest more
food
crops
volume
but
also
receive better quality nourishment (because some GMOs have intended hybridization to own some special desirable traits from superior
crops
, which helps them resist some insects and fungi and supply a high density of nutritious).
As a result
, people would receive higher
food
crop
volume
with more mineral elements, which would solve the global
food
shortage
and malnutrition.
Thirdly
, changing to other eco-friendly energy sources
such
as wind, solar or atomic power would limit the adverse greenhouse gases on the environment.
Furthermore
, replacing electric saving energy and electric vehicles are indispensable factors to eradicate
this
issue holistically.
Lastly
, the
government
should preserve a suitable
food
volume
to avoid any sudden
food
shortage
and intervene to stabilize the market prices of some
food
crops
.
To conclude
, the population explosion is the main cause of almost all problems, which only be solved by replacing any eco-friendly energy source to deter
food
crop disruption.
However
, the
food
shortage
needs to cultivate superior GMOs to advance the
volume
of
food
crops
and curb some malnutrition diseases.
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