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How recycled paper is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make cornparisons where relevant

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The diagram illustrates the various stages involved in recycling
paper
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.
This
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 process consists of sequential steps, beginning with the collection of used
paper
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 and culminating in the production of recycled
paper
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.
Overall
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, it is evident that recycling of
paper
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 is a linear process that involves four distinct stages. It starts with the making of
pulp
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 and proceeds through steps
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 as filtering, cleaning, and making of
paper
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 before the recycled
paper
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 is
finally
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 ready to use. The process is entirely man-made. In order to produce recycled
paper
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, the used
paper
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 is transported by the conveyor belt to a processing plant.
Following
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this
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, the used
paper
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 is mixed with
water
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 and other chemicals to make filtered
pulp
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. The
pulp
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 must be filtered with
water
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 being removed. After that,
further
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 cleaning of unfiltered
pulp
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 is done by adding them through a tube to a different container filled with soap and
water
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. The air is supplied to
this
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 container and one tube connected to it removes ink.
Subsequently
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, additional cleaning is done by sending the unfiltered
pulp
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 to a chamber filled with
water
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 and chemicals before rolling it on the conveyor belt.
Finally
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, to create recycled rollers, the cleaned and filtered
pulp
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 is placed on the conveyor belt where heated rollers flatten the
pulp
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 and remove excess
water
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Expand on the description of each stage to add more depth.
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Clear sequence of stages indicating a good understanding of the process.
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The overall structure of the essay is clear and follows a logical sequence.
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The essay provides a good summary of the main features of the recycling process.

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