Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Statistics show the population of
people
who choose alternative solutions rather than visiting their usual doctor for their health
problems
has exponentially increased since the
last
decade. In terms of my mind,
due to
many
problems
like misunderstanding complex diseases and leading to being unfaithful to the
doctors
,
this
can be considered as a negative development in
society
. It's true that in so many complex and fatal diseases like cancer, the
time
of
diagnosis
plays a significant role in treatment. In these kinds of health
problems
, if
diagnosis
happens as soon as possible, may prevent the death of the patient.
While
the
diagnosis
time
can be interpreted as a golden
time
, many
people
prefer to help themselves with some alternate
treatments
like herbal teas, special soups and home
treatments
.
Consequently
, if they face major health
problems
like heart disease, not only are these kinds of
treatments
mostly ineffective but
also
make the
time
for disease worse.
For instance
, my aunt had felt pain in her chest many years before she went to the doctor to find her problem out,
hence
she lost the golden
time
the
diagnosis
and the disease became fatal. She passed away three years ago.
On the other hand
,
this
may lead members of
society
to be unfaithful to their
doctors
and medical science.
Furthermore
, many of these alternatives and options come out as scientific facts which it's not true and these rumours can make work for medical
society
harder.
For example
, when so much wrong information comes out on social media,
doctors
and medical
society
should inform
people
of the true facts and
this
is a new responsibility for them which gains their precious
time
. So not only the
time
that they can save
people
should be spent on
this
problem but
also
makes them frustrated.
This
is a real problem and negative development in
society
that governments should take decisions to tackle it. So
to sum up
,
however
, the number of
people
that use alternative
treatments
rather than visiting their
doctors
has increased, personally I consider it as a negative development because of the
problems
that it can cause for medical
society
and preventing fatal diseases.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • alternative medicines
  • treatments
  • positive development
  • negative development
  • health problems
  • usual doctor
  • access
  • personalized approach
  • holistic well-being
  • lack of regulation
  • evidence-based research
  • proper medical treatment
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