Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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Statistics show the population of
people
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who choose alternative solutions rather than visiting their usual doctor for their health
problems
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has exponentially increased since the
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decade. In terms of my mind,
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many
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like misunderstanding complex diseases and leading to being unfaithful to the
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,
this
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can be considered as a negative development in
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. It's true that in so many complex and fatal diseases like cancer, the
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of
diagnosis
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plays a significant role in treatment. In these kinds of health
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, if
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happens as soon as possible, may prevent the death of the patient.
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the
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time
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can be interpreted as a golden
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, many
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prefer to help themselves with some alternate
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like herbal teas, special soups and home
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.
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, if they face major health
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like heart disease, not only are these kinds of
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mostly ineffective but
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make the
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for disease worse.
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, my aunt had felt pain in her chest many years before she went to the doctor to find her problem out,
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she lost the golden
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the
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and the disease became fatal. She passed away three years ago.
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,
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may lead members of
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to be unfaithful to their
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and medical science.
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, many of these alternatives and options come out as scientific facts which it's not true and these rumours can make work for medical
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harder.
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, when so much wrong information comes out on social media,
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and medical
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should inform
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of the true facts and
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is a new responsibility for them which gains their precious
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. So not only the
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that they can save
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should be spent on
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problem but
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makes them frustrated.
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is a real problem and negative development in
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that governments should take decisions to tackle it. So
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,
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, the number of
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that use alternative
treatments
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rather than visiting their
doctors
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has increased, personally I consider it as a negative development because of the
problems
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that it can cause for medical
society
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and preventing fatal diseases.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • alternative medicines
  • treatments
  • positive development
  • negative development
  • health problems
  • usual doctor
  • access
  • personalized approach
  • holistic well-being
  • lack of regulation
  • evidence-based research
  • proper medical treatment
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