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The parents of your Australian friend chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for him Write a letter to Chris parents, in your letter Say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party Explain why you won't be able to attend Give details of a plan to see Christ on a different time

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Dear Sir, I hope
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 letter finds you in good health and in high spirits! I would like to express my deepest gratitude for the invitation
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 your son's birthday party. I am flabbergasted that you are leaving no
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 unturned to make it a successful event. I would love to be a part of his birthday party event as I am his best friend.
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, I would love to see the expression that Chrish would have when he
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 the event that you have organized.
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,
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 an unexpected
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,I won't be able to attend the program, and the reason behind
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 is that my mother met with an accident . She slipped from the first floor of her apartment and fractured her leg. Docter has advised her to rest and it would take some time to recover.
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 situation has compelled me to be by her side. Despite the present circumstances, I will still make an alternative arrangement to meet Chris. I have decided to invite him to stay
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 weekend at my home and prepare some exquisite cuisine.
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, I will take him on a walk to a nearby park and enjoy the flora and fauna of my locality.
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, he will even get to meet my mom and receive her blessings. Yours Faithfully, Shreyashi

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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