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The table shows the information of total health expenditure per capita in five countries in 2019.

The table shows the information of total health expenditure per capita in five countries in 2019.
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The given table provides data about annual health costs in Australia, Germany, the United States, Japan and the UK in 2019.
Overall
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, America has shown the highest US
dollars
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while
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 the lowest amount had been in the United Kingdom during the given period.
Firstly
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, the US spent a tremendous amount on being healthier than the other five countries, which was 11073 US
dollars
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.
As well as
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 Germany had the second largest place of its kind 6646 US
dollars
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, meanwhile 5187 US
dollars
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 were used by Australia at that particular time.
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, Japan and the United Kingdom have reported that the minimum amount of payments in 2019, were 4823 and 4652 US
dollars
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 respectively over the year.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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