Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative a negative development?

Despite smartphones bringing an increasing number of

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, it has become an immense issue for

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when their offspring

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in it.

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some people believe that smartphones have

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number of postivities, others argue that

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hold numerous demerits and

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on their

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.

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significant benefits and are considered

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with, the most compelling reasons for engrossing

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smartphone

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of other activities and there are

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cellular

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.

while

parents as a mean to avoid

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and rivals resort to

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their

children

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with

smartphone

applications.

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, nowadays masses have witnessed a tremendous number of applications,

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and games

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furthermor the childish channels.

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, the abundance of

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channels is one of the factors which

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day utilizing

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. these are the most common causes for that phenomenon.

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, parents should dominate

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by involving youngsters in other beneficial activities.

nevertheless

, in my opinion,

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plays a pivotal role in the

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existence

. it widely

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acknowledged

that utilizing phone drive the world to be easier ,

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educational purposes,

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becomes readily capable to learn and study by application.

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,

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in the world,

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people can contact

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without

any

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.

nonetheless

, it can offer other

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applications

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related to health and medical objects and become

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part of our life.

that is

why,

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is

such

a beneficial innovation .

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, there are profound reasons that drive

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smartphone

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.

smartphone

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has a lot of attractions and

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with

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joyful materials

such

as games and channels and

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and parent

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to let them

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accompanying

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by phone rather than

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fighting

and compete and make noises.

therefore

,

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believe that it acts as an important source for study and support

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in daily

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requirements

.