some people believe that culture will be ruined if it used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting culture. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
It is believed that
culture
will be destroyed if it used
to earn Add a missing verb
is used
tourism
income, but others thought
that Wrong verb form
think
tourism
is the only way of preserving culture
. This
essay agrees with the second statement and will explain in the following essay.
On the one hand, tourism
is the most effective way to protect. Travellers travel to an area to learn about these
local Correct determiner usage
the
culture
, they
learn about customs of the area or some traditional Correct your spelling
the
festival
, or they can try local traditional Fix the agreement mistake
festivals
job
. Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
For example
, if you go to Bat Trang’s pottery, you can learn about this
village
history, you can Change noun form
village's
also
try making items which are made from pottery. Moreover
, the evolution of technology such
as smartphone, computer etc. make young people less likely to pay attention about
Change preposition
to
the
Correct article usage
apply
culture
, travelling
is Correct your spelling
Travelling
the
way to introduce Correct article usage
a
culture
to young people and make them know it.
On the other hand
, tourism
is also
the main reason that destroy
the Change the verb form
destroys
culture
. For example
, Ao Dai of Vietnam attached
Add a missing verb
is attached
with
Vietnam women, but a lot of foreign tourists know Change preposition
to
this
culture
and they use it to make dirty content on social media like facebook
, Capitalize word
Facebook
youtube
, Correct your spelling
YouTube
tiktok
etc. It Correct your spelling
TikTok
make
our Change the verb form
makes
culture
worse in other foreign tourist mind
. What is more, tourists who Change the wording
another foreign tourist mind
other foreign tourist minds
are
lack of aware can destroy some historical sites.
In conclusion, Unnecessary verb
apply
tourism
can ruin the culture
. It is also
a factor to preserve our tradition.Submitted by [email protected] on
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