Some people believe that the culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting culture.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There is a common belief that culture will be destroyed when

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use it to make

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from tourists,

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others claim that using these

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as

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-making ventures is the only way to save them. I contend that using cultural

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to attract visitors can increase the revenue that can be used for preservation purposes, it can heighten

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's awareness and support the

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's economy. It is vital to understand that

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is a necessity in continuing these

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,

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coming from visitors will bring in actual revenue for the skilled labourers of these traditional villages.

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, many inhabitants of Bat Trang village in Vietnam make their living by selling traditional ceramic products to tourists

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are able to continue one of the oldest

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in Vietnam.

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, some believe that visitors can permanently change these

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as these traditional artisans are forced to change their methods and products for commercialization, in order to compete in an increasingly competitive market space.

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may be a credible point, but the effect of

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on

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's awareness should be considered.

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, the Vietnamese government has built several museums around the

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that solely exhibit examples of ethnic minority cultures in an attempt to protect cultural values without affecting the lives of those ethnic minorities, yet successfully gathering a lot of public attention and support. The writer contends that

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plays a vital role in a

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's economy since it is one of the services that creates the most jobs in a nation.

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,

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creates jobs and brings in a massive amount of

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for a

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.

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, island countries

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as the Bahamas and the Maldives are heavily reliant on

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, as it is the only economic sector that could thrive there and it is the only job-creating sector.

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people

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argue that

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can be detrimental to the local culture, the writer emphasizes its role in preservation, creating livelihood and economic value.

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, it should have been shown that

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is the only way of protecting culture.