The graph below gives information about internet users in three countries between 1999 and 2009.

The graph below gives information about internet users in three countries between 1999 and 2009.
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The line graph compares the proportion of
internet
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users in the
USA
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,
Canada
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and Mexico from 1999 to 2009.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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all three countries registered a dramatic increase from over ten years. What is more,
Canada
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had the highest number of people who used the
Internet
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in 2009. As can be seen, Mexico had partial growth in the first three years after that it increased sharply until 2005.
Then
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, it continued its upward trend to reach a peak at almost 40% in 2009. In 1999, the
USA
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had a significant number of
internet
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users more than
Canada
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.
Also
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, it is noticeable that both the
USA
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and
Canada
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had the same percentage in 2002 and 2005 ( less than a half and three-fifths approximately respectively ).
Nevertheless
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,
Canada
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was the country which had the largest number of the population who used the
internet
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in 2009 and it summed up to 100% compared to the
USA
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which had only nearly 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, usa, canada with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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