In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think this books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

In the
last
decade, people have become oriented to watching TV shows and reading books about criminal activities,
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these kinds of problems are increasing in their societies, and they want to
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aware of them to
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their children from
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or keep their lives in safe side.
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these programs can be useful for adults, they can have some bad
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on adolescent’s
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. I think it is not a good idea to show or write
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scandal activity
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details
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. To commence with, as per the present condition, novel or drama about crime is
such
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violation activity, which helps people to learn how
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their youth.
For instance
, in a live TV press, it was shown that reading season two of “Finding The Original Guilty” has helped a police officer to understand who was the leader of
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team of
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Bank.
On the other hand
, it would not be suitable for youth and young individuals, because it might change their
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and make them excited to do unpleasant things
such
as picking,
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they are in their important period of their growing up time and should learn how to be a useful citizen.
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them to watching or reading by their age. In conclusion,
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happening in the country or all over the world
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TV drama,
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,
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and other things, help nations to mitigate
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fraud and
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, it might not be pleasant for young or maybe encourage them to do dangerous functions. I strongly believe that they should be restricted by
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age and not
to
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be allowed to show details
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all people.
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