New forms of money are becoming extremely popular nowadays. Is this a positive development or adding risk to the system? Should new money technology face greater regulation and scrutiny? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
The finance system has been changing throughout the world with the development of technology in the
last
decades . Crypto
Correct your spelling
Cryptomoney
money
currency
has been very popular among people
as an investment tool. Nowadays, the most popular cryptocurrency is Bitcoin, even though, there are a lot of sub-cons. Cryptocurrency also
has its own market, also
. Therefore
, People
have been discussing whether this
new currency
is safe enough or creating a new risk to the existing system. I think that new forms of money
should be investigated thoroughly with detailed regulations by countries
.
All countries
have their own currency
and their central bank. Money
is published by countries
' central banks with the approval of their governments. This
process is quite complicated and the central bank should have enough income such
as precious metals etc., while
publishing new money
. Due to
the fact that fluctuation of currency
and inflation rate have been calculated according to
countries
' financial power.
However
, considering these complicated systems in the countries
, it is not clear who produces this
currency
. Moreover
, how is the value of the crypto coin set and who decides? It is produced in computer farms without controlling
officially. Some of the finance Wrong verb form
being controlled
people
think that it will be ended sooner as a soup foam. I agree with them and also
I think that it is quite similar to gambling like rolling the dice. The ironic situation is that some people
have been increasing their income with this
market. On the other hand
, some of them have cheated and lost their money
in this
market.
In conclusion, I firmly support that there should be clear definitions and strict investigations for the new forms of money
. This
should not be turned into a new gambling medium.Submitted by nilufer.korkmaz on
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