Many people today would argue that cinemas are becoming irrelevant due to new streaming services. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that
cinemas
are becoming less attractive than new streaming ecosystems
such
as Netflix and
Youtube
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. In my
opinion
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this
approach is
complety
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completely
acceptable
due to
these
platforms
' abilities. The main difference between conventional
cinemas
and streaming services is their
flexibilities
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flexibility
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. Cinema saloons only offer 8-10
movies
as options,
on the other hand
, consumers have much more alternatives on Netflix or Amazon.
For instance
, if a person only
like
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to watch romantic
movies
, those saloons may not have a
movie
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this
genre.
This
limitation might force customers to watch undesired
movies
,
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and
affects
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their moods.
Therefore
, lots of customers show
interests
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interest
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to use
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online
movie
platforms
based on previous experiences. Another factor which affects
balance
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the balance
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between
cinemas
and online services
that
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cinemas
require
enourmous
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enormous
effort to prepare for consuming content. Nowadays going to
cinema
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is a full-time activity which has its own rituals
such
as going to
mall
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and window shopping before entering the
movie
saloon or eating fast food just before or after the event. Some people do not have much time to do all of these things,
thus
those only want to watch the content.
Moreover
, individuals can easily start to watch a
movie
through streaming
platforms
,
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they do not have to suffer from these obligations. In conclusion, some part of
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community
believe
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that watching
movies
in
cinemas
are
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becoming unpopular, and
this
may be related
with
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new streaming
platforms
. From my point of view,
flexibility
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the flexibility
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of
these platform
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these platforms
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are superior
,
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and
required
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the required
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effort for watching
a
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content is optimal for lots of people who want to use their limited time wisely.
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