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In the future all cars,buses and trucks will be driverless.The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.In the future all cars,buses and trucks wil

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future
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 all cars,buses and trucks will be
driverless
.The only people travelling inside these
vehicles
 will be passengers.Rapid growth of technology becoming
driverless
vehicles
 are reality. Technology has proved that
successfull
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successful
successfully
 and it is hard to think about
driverless
vehicles
.There are some advantages to
driverless
vehicles
 we don'
t
 take care
about
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 controls of the
vehicles
.Some drivers will drive carelessly
this
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 leads to accidents.If drivers have any health issues like fever they can'
t
 drive.Passengers will willing to travel long with non-stop drivers can'
t
 because they need to
take
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rest and they want to eat but
driverless
vehicles
 will travel non-stop long
distance
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.
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they
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 are some positive aspects,but
also
 some
most
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disadvantages
in
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driverless
vehicles
. There are many chances
to
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 engine malfunction or sensors
of
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driverless
vehicles
 .The most impact on millions of unemployment.Millions of people can lose their jobs
this
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create
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major
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 fall
on
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economics
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 of the country.The cost will be really high for the
vehicles
.Some families who facing financial crisis
they
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can'
t
 afford
to
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it.If the car gets out of control may cause disaster. In conclusion,rapid technology
have
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 some advantages
although
 on
th
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the
 basis of
the
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unemployment.
Disadvantages
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 of
driverless
vehicles
 can
lose
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income
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 and challenges to their mental and physical health.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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