Nowadays a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think this can have negative effects on children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, a large amount of
advertisements
are aimed at children
whereas
some people argue that it has to be banned. While
advertising can have several negative impacts on children
, I believe it should not be completely banned.
on one hand, advertising can have a detrimental effect on the relationship between children
and parents because advertisements
can have a strong impact
on the behaviours of kids. It is easy for commercials to influence children
to buy products
by creating attractive themes. The unhealthy products
being marketed may not be as healthy as advertised which can also
have a bad impact
on children
's health. Unfortunately, many children
will be easily persuaded by unhealthy foods and this
can have a bad effect on their health. For ,example according to
a study conducted by Melbourne University, it is found that the amount of unhealthy food consumption has increased with advertisements
.
on the other hand
, banning the commercials can have a negative financial impact
on many companies and employees. Banning advertising on products
can impact
the jobs of marketing team members. This
can lead to increased unemployment.For ,example Coca-Cola employs so many individuals for marketing and advertisements
, if advertising is banned it can cause unemployment in different departments and the government has to provide financial support for the unemployed which can have a serious impact
on society.
To conclude
, Even though advertising products
targeting children
can have several negative effects, it's also
not recommended to ban which can impact
the financial well-being of society. so it is not a good idea to ban advertisements
completely.Submitted by jayachandra006 on
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