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some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consifer that tourism is the only way of protecting culture. discuss both disdes and give your own opinion.

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Some
people
 think that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but other
people
 have different think that tourism is the only way of protecting culture. In
this
 essay will talk about the problem
is
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that is
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 happening and give
own
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my own
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 opinion.
first,
about activities like the
government
 collecting money from many
people
, some tourist attractions in the country will
increase
 the
cost
 of souvenirs and any food have a higher
cost
 than other places. When the
government
 makes
people
 feel fair play and after
that
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,that
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 they will think it is breaking the
law
 to have
many
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much
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 money or if they do not do that, they will not to go their hometown because it will become earn money for the
government
.
second,
some
people
 have their hometown as an attraction,
for example
, in Vietnam Ninh Binh's attraction is Ho Chi Minh’s attraction their many souvenirs do not have a higher
cost
 because
people
 there respect a hero like Ho Chi Minh so they do not
increase
 the
cost
 for items. When
people
 do in there. If do that,
people
 do not feel do not fair play, they will not break the
law
. In
this
 opinion, that think in tourist attractions do not
increase
 the
cost
for
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 items,
people
 when visit are not disappointed with them the culture will not be ruined and the
government
 will control it easily. In the country do not have
people
 break the
law
 it is very good for all
people
. In conclusion, I think the best way is not to
increase
 the
cost
 of items in attractions and they will not break the
law
 and the country will be peaceful.
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