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Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at the school. To what extend do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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School is an essential part of all
students
 and to improve the system educationalists recommend many solutions. International
exchange
 is one of the activities that will benefit
students
 and increase their knowledge. The program itself
have
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 many advantages
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 its disadvantages are outweighed by it. One of the advantages of international
exchange
 is
students
 become more tolerant towards other nationalities and races. In the past,
people
 did not know about other
people
 from different parts of the earth, so when the
European
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Europeans
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 saw
Asian
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Asians
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 for the first time they had
few
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 fights.
However
, in
21st
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 century
people
 are treated more equally, and it is better to interact with others from the school.
For example
, in most universities, nowadays,
students
 can study in different countries for a limited period, and it succeeded.
Students
 have become more friendly with everyone. In conclusion, teenagers need to start to learn about different cultures, nations, and traditions.
On the other hand
, international
exchange
 can become more burdensome for teens who already struggle with insecurities, hormones, and exams. As the years pass, it is getting harder to study for teenagers.
For instance
,
people
 in their teens face
with
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insecurities and are bothered
with
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 others’ opinions about them.
Furthermore
, it affects their education and self-esteem.
That is
 why international
exchange
, which needs patience, time, and strong nerves,
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 teenagers
have
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 breakouts. All in all,
pros
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 of international
exchange
 fully outweigh its cons. Even though it needs many abilities and courage,
students
 will be more
tolerated
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to
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the
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different groups of
people
.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educationalists
  • international exchange visits
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • outweigh
  • benefit
  • teenagers
  • school
  • exposes
  • different cultures
  • perspectives
  • enhances
  • language skills
  • promotes
  • independence
  • self-confidence
  • builds
  • lifelong friendships
  • provides
  • unique learning experiences
  • expensive
  • homesickness
  • emotional distress
  • careful planning
  • logistical arrangements
  • disrupt
  • academic progress
  • safety
  • security risks
  • cultural appropriation
  • misunderstandings
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