The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
The diagram gives information about the process of producing
sugar
from sugar
cane.
Overall
, there are seven stages throughout the whole process. First of all, sugar
cane needs twelve to eighteen months to grow up. Secondly
, a farmer can choose the traditional way or the modern way to harvest the star canes. The former uses a knife to cut sugar
canes one by one in hands, and the latter is driving the farming vehicle, which cuts sugar
canes by hand in the front of the farming vehicle and puts them in the bed of the vehicle.
Thirdly
, sugar
cane is mashed by the crushing machine and it turns into juice
. In addition
, juice
is poured into the limestone filter in order to purify the juice
. After that, juice
to the evaporator, which is heating over the fire, and then
syrup comes out. The next step is
separating sugar
crystals from syrup by the centrifuge. At the end
of the process, gather up sugar
in a container to dry and cool it.Submitted by Joanna
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