You are going to study in a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college giving your accommodation requirements. You should outline what your room and food needs are and also ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want. You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You do NOT need to write your own address.

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Respected Sir, I, Sandeep Kaur: a new graduate student of your renowned university writing

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letter to request you to provide me with a room in the campus dorm. My classes are commencing on December 7th, 2023 and I am planning to stay at the college hostel because of the ease it will offer me in commuting within the organisation. I would prefer a private room equipped with a bed, a study table and preferably a chair as well.

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, I would appreciate it if you could please provide me with a list of the food options available in the hostel canteen, as I am a health-conscious person. If all the rooms are occupied, could you please suggest some reliable sources to find a suitable room? I will be a new immigrant here having no awareness of the area. It would be great if you could provide me with any property advisor's contact details so that I can arrange my accommodation before my arrival. Looking forward to hearing back from you soon. Yours faithfully Sandeep Kaur

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