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The graph below gives information about internet users in three countries between 1999 and 2009.

The graph below gives information about internet users in three countries between 1999 and 2009.
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The diagram below illustrates the proportion of
internet
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 surfers over ten-year periods in three different nations USA, Mexico and Canada. From an
overall
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 perspective, it is noticeable that the majority of populations in 1999 stared at a very low rate of
users
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while
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 in, contrast the
users
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 became abundant throughout the reporting period. Observing the details, it is remarkable that the USA had the most
internet
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users
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 in 1999 and rose steadily to 70% in 2005
then
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 slowly reached its peak at 80% in 2009.
Similarly
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, Canada started in 1999 and remained in the middle
then
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 experienced fluctuation of increasing and soared to the top of over 100% in 20's century.
On the contrary
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, Mexico began with the lowest rate of
internet
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 surfers in 1999 and slightly climbed up and maintained approximately 30% throughout the reporting time.
To sum up
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, with what has been analysed and compared, it is crucial to highlight that
internet
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users
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 are more present in every country.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, users with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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