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more and more plastic waste has polluted cities, the countryside and oceans. What problems does it cause and what measures can be taken?

#plastic #waste #cities #countryside #oceans #measures
Nowadays,
people
use
plactic
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plastic
 in
there
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their
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 day to day life
due to
 which cities are being polluted
as well as
 the
coountryside
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countryside
 too.
This
have
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has
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 become
an
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a
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measures
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measure
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problems
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of problems
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 for the nation. As
a
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apply
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people
 are using more and more
plactic
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plastic
 which have polluted cities, the
countryside
, oceans and
also
 land.
Due to
,
to
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too
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 much
pollution
it
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apply
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is affecting
on
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apply
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the
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apply
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people's
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people
health
. There are so many types of
pollution
 like air
pollution
,
noice
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noise
pollution
, land
pollution
, air
pollution
 and the main reason is
plactic
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plastic
.
Hence
,
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it is
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 easy to
use
plactic
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plastic
 because price friendly but it
affect
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affects
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on
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apply
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public
health
 too much.
For example
,
a
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apply
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children are buying
plactic
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plastic
 to save money but it even
affect
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affects
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 on
health
also
. There are so many
alternative
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alternatives
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 for
plactic
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plastic
 like a
people
 can
use
 paper bags,
clothes
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and clothes
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 bags and there are so many eco-friendly bags which can
be
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be used
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use
 by
people
 and can help
people
 to save
people
health
. If a person is using
plactic
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plastic
then
 he or she should reuse
as
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it as
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 well as
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recycle
reclcye
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itreclcye
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.
For example
, a person can
use
cloth
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a cloth
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 bag when he or she is
ging
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going
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 for shopping.
However
,
Plactic
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Plastic
 is even
polliting
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polluting
pollinating
countryside
 because when
people
 go on
trip
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a trip
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 to
countryside
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the countryside
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.
Thus
, NGOs should give more and more knowledge to
a
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the
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 public.
To conclude
, it can be said
then
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that
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 cities, states,
countryside
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the countryside
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, land and oceans are being polluted by
plactitc
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pollution
.
This
have
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has
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cause
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caused
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 so many
problem
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problems
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 like
on
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apply
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people
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people's
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health
 and much more. By taking some measures by
people
, community, NGOs and
the nations improvement
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the improvement of the nation
the nation's improvement
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 can be made.
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