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Online education training becoming increasingly popular in business world. Discuss advantages and disadvantages in the modern world.

#education #business #world
A significant Learning boom can be observed on the internet in the
last
 few decades. Many businesses want to
adapt
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online
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an online
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mode
 of training their
business
 model to educate their
employees
. There are plenty of
benefit
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 for any
business
 to use and integrate online
education
However
, the following essay will shed light on both benefits and drawbacks. First and foremost, the online
mode
 of
education
 is
more
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cheaper and faster compared to
traditional
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the traditional
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mode
 of
education
. A company expert from around the world can share their wisdom
to
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with
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 various teams without crossing any geofencing boundaries. Google is currently running
cloud-based
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a cloud-based
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 virtual training program from the United States of America for its
employees
 around the world.
In addition
 to that, for an employee, online tuition provides more flexibility to be on the job and
learning
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 new things at the same time.
Employee
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Employees
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 can learn new skill sets
while
commute
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 to work or having spare time at home without giving away
his
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their
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 working hours. Dominos Australia has an online training program for its
employees
 which is accessible around the clock so they can learn new skill
set
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sets
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 without working on
job
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the job
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. On the flip view, online training
program
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programs
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 should be robust in terms of cyber security. As whenever
business
share
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 their valuable information over the internet, it is a great threat from
the
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apply
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hackers to steal
business
 trade and sell to other competitors.
Similarly
, businesses cannot afford any downtime regarding internet connectivity as both parties would be losing their precious time. In a nutshell, an online
mode
 of
education
 for
employees
 is a great tool to improve the productivity of existing
employees
 without making any hassle as long as
business
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businesses
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 have a reliable system for delivery and security measures for
venerable
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vulnerable
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business
 information.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Accessibility
  • Flexibility
  • Logistical challenges
  • Personalized learning pace
  • Cost Effectiveness
  • Interactive tools
  • Industry standards
  • Social Interaction
  • Group dynamics
  • Self-Discipline
  • Technological Issues
  • Digital divide
  • Quality Control
  • Accreditation
  • Up-to-date Information
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