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What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study Abroad?

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depending on the economy of your
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 there may be a few advantages and disadvantages to living or studying abroad.
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 as more access to high-quality facilities and better
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 life expectancy. these two are quite arbitrary and subjective for each person. they can be varied depending on your expectations. first about the advantages. you will get to meet a lot of new
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 and experience culture
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. meeting new
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 is a great way to expand your network and broaden your circle. you will learn more about life if you spend time chatting and talking to different
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. culture
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 can be beneficial, in a state of
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 your brain tries to find the best way to survive and that can be a boost to your creativity. there may be a few disadvantages as well. you are far from your family and friends and it can be very hard to maintain a good worldview without adequate emotional support from
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 who you love and care about. culture
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 can be disruptive as well it's known to be a mostly negative experience for most
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 but if you ready yourself up it can be a good challenge. in ,conclusion leaving your
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 whether for work or study is a hard challenge to overcome. most
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 get through
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 challenges and get used to the new
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 in no time. but it can vary from person to person. in my ,opinion its advantages are far more than the disadvantages I would consider travelling to a new
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 because of the economic situation in my own
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. it is very hard to leave your nation behind but sometimes you have to do the right thing for yourself.
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task response
Ensure that you address all aspects of the question by providing balanced arguments for both advantages and disadvantages of leaving one's country to live or study abroad.
coherence cohesion
Organize your essay in a logical structure with clear introduction, body paragraphs with supporting points, and a conclusion that restates your main ideas.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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