More and more plastic waste has polluted cities, the countryside and oceans. What problems does it cause and what measures can be taken?

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day and age, some studies show that plastic waste has more effects on our lives which is not at the same level effect compared to previous years. In

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essay, I will discuss the causes of, and suggest suitable solutions to, the issue.

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, nowadays, our ecosystem is in danger, especially the environment because there are many variety reasons for plastic waste.

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with, the main cause is the disposable products that people more and more are using disposable goods ,

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, bottles.

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, those products stay on the earth for a long time and it seems that they need a long period of time to decay.

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, we are suffering from many different health problems like asthma and difficulty breathing because of air pollution and water pollution, and

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, the products .

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, there are some possible solutions for individuals to make everything better.

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, To start with, the major solution is humans and companies. We have the ability to establish an organization or special place for that,

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, to opening events to raise the awareness of people for the earth's health.

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, another solution, everyone could change from using disposable to long-run stuff for many examples.

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, the earth will be cleaned and the individual will not complain about any health problems. In conclusion, plastic misuse is not a local problem, but it is a global problem.

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, everyone must take action to change.

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not hard to change different small things in our daily routine.

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More and more plastic waste has polluted cities, the countryside and oceans. What problems does it cause and what measures can be taken?

Your opinion

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