The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table gives information about the number of mobile phones traded in millions from 2006 to 2012 which are for 5 brands: Nokia, Ericsson, Samsung, Motorola, and Apple.

Overall

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, Both Samsung and Apple increased the number of items sold

while

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others fell.

To begin

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, Samsung had 117 million phones sold,

then

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kept rising until it reached 396.5 in 2012 which was the highest at that time.

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Apple had significant growth which was 2.3 in 2007, and it doubled the numbers every year and

then

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ended up to 135.8 in 2012. Nokia,

on the other hand

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, steadily dropped the numbers in 6 years.

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there was slight fluctuation above 400, it

finally

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went down to 335 in 2012 which was a 10 difference from the initial figure.

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for both Motorola and Ericsson, they started at 210 and 74 respectively

then

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experienced a steep decline and ended up at the same number which was 28 in 2012.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

157 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

annual sales
fluctuations
market saturation
technological advancements
consumer trends
brand dominance
growth trajectory
market share
innovations
peak sales
decline
stagnate
proliferate
exponential growth
market dynamics
forecast

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The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In many countries, young people decide to leave their parents home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing home with friends. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.

The best way to solve the traffic and transportation problem is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs and countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree

89.The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

You are not satisfied with a product you purchased. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter: - Describe the product and the problem. - Explain what you want the store to do. - Say what you will do if the issue is not resolved.

Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?