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In many societies, unpaid work such as volunteering or internships is becoming increasingly common. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of unpaid work.

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In recent times there have become more and more
volunteers
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, because of a lot of competitions.
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,
volunteers
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 do not take
money
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 for their work. In my opinion, in some cases, it is not good, but
overall
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 the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
One
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 strong argument in favour of drawbacks is not taking
money
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 for their work.
In other words
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,
volunteers
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 mostly do difficult activities, and it will be good if managers give
volunteers
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 some percentage of the profit.
According to
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 the statistics of 2022 year 0 percent of humans took
money
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 from volunteering.
Consequently
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, if it continues there might be fewer
volunteers
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 in the
world
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. There are several arguments why being a volunteer can be beneficial.
Firstly
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,
this
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 is absolutely interesting.
This
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 means that being a volunteer can lead to some feelings
such
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 as satisfaction.
Furthermore
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, by working in
this
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 sphere some people can see famous humans in that sport.
For instance
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,
last
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 month Aktau held the
World
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 Championship in chess,
moreover
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, there were a lot of famous people
such
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 as
last
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 year's
world
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 champions and so on.
Secondly
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,
this
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 is lying in good hotels, eating tasty foods and
this
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 kind of thing. Because the government give
money
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 to managers, more accurately
this
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money
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 has to be spent on step forwards.
Last
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 month’s
World
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 Championship can be an argument for
this
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.
Volunteers
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 lived in 5 starts hotels and ate in Sweden restaurants for
one
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 week.
Therefore
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 by being present
one
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 can feel and live a lavish life. There were drawbacks and benefits of being an offer
one
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's service. In conclusion, being a volunteer is very interesting,and it can lead to good feelings and of course, memorises.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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