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Writing Samples
Band 7.5

You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with, explain ways in which your Town centre is different from most other town centres, offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

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Dear sir, I am Ashif Nawaz, and I am writing
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 letter in response to an article which was published in your newspaper dated 26/09/2023. In your article you described
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centres
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 across the country which was very informative. You have mentioned the historical backgrounds of these
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centres
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 which was unknown to me earlier. I
also
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 acknowledge
statistical
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the statistical
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 information you have presented in your article.
However
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, you mentioned that
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the appearance
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 of all
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centres
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 are same in our country which is not correct. My
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centre
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 is distinct for its architectural beauty. The building was constructed in 1972 and is very unique in design. There are four massive towers joining each other making the building visible from a long distance. If you observe the
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centre
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 closely, you will identify its uniqueness easily. I would appreciate it if you could pay a visit to our
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centre
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 physically. I will guide you throughout the tour so that you can learn about our
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centre
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 better and notice the differences it
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 with other
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centres
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 in our country. So, I
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therefore
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, hope that you will visit my
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 to have a closer observation of our
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centre
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. Please let me know if you need any assistance in
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 matter. Yours faithfully, Ashif Nawaz

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