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Some people say that the best way to improve the overall general health of the public is to offer more sport facilities. Others say that this would have little effect and other measures are necessary to improve public health. Discuss both views.

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In the present age. Whether donating to more
sports
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 facilities provides more benefits for the public than not giving that much necessary to public health has sparked much debate. Some
people
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 assert that it is not that important.
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 many others argue that general strength improves
people
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overall
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. Personally, I am in favour of the latter view.  a convincing argument can be made that general strength for nations is highly effective to their present
life
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 and future. To start with, general health
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 as natural sources of food and exercise provides the human
body
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 with energy and prevents the
body
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 from having strength issues.
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, the community can live younger and complete their daily tasks and achievements with significant results, Which impacts development in their work and
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 routine leading to success.
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, offering more
sports
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 material is a factor in changing society's habits and realising how sport has wonderful results for our own mind and
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.
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, the older community will get less chance of heart attack and will live longer,
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,
body
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 genetics will rise and improve either by pushing to limits or breaking limits.
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, the best way to improve is to be on a strict path to a healthy
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 rather than taking off workouts and eating good food.  admittedly,
people
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 can have fewer problems in their
life
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. The reason for
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 is if their daily routine at work or at home where only sitting and facing the computer for any purpose it will harm their
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 structure and will impact their goals and duties. In summary, I would concede that reducing
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 facilities has some issues. despite that,
people
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 who attend play activities have a better lifestyle.
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, I'm convinced that
people
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 should play rather than not doing any
sports
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 facilities.
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