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The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart illustrates the percentages of people of different ages living in Iceland over the given period of 30
years
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 from 1990 to 2020.
Overall
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, it can be seen that there was an upward trend in the number of people at 25-54
years
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 old,
while
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 the figure for the
two
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 youngest
age
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groups
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 decreased slightly during
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 same timeline.
Nonetheless
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, the
two
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 other
groups
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 stayed almost the same.
According to
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 three younger
groups
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, the 25-54
age
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 group grew significantly from 31% in 1990 to almost half of the population in 2020.
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 a trend was not seen in the
two
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 figures for the youngest group, children under 14
years
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 old saw an approximate drop of 8%, followed by a 10% decrease in the population in the 15-24
age
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 group. Turning to the remaining categories, people at the
age
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 of 65 and over had almost the same figure as the 55-64
age
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 one, respectively 12% and 13%. Over 10
years
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, the
two
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 oldest
groups
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 remained unchanged, whilst the number of elderly between the ages of 55 and 64 fell to 10% of the population.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, two, age, groups with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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