In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, transformation technology is very massive in our lives. Some
people
say that all forms of the
transportation will be Correct article usage
apply
driverless
in the upcoming life which
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and
people
become passengers inside these vehicles whenever
they go. At Correct your spelling
wherever
this
point, I can argue that there are a lot of advantages despite the drawbacks.
The reason why driverless
car
have an advantage is because easy to Fix the agreement mistake
cars
use
and comfortable for older people
. Furthermore
, driverless
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the driverless
a driverless
car
is very suitable for vast
majority of Add an article
the vast
people
who want to travel with
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apply
a
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far
distance and they do not want to ride alone because of tired. Correct word choice
long
For example
, my manager in the company told
that he Verb problem
said
prefer
to Change the verb form
prefers
use
a driverless
car
whenever they have a trip with his family so he can have a break while
on the road. Additionally
, driverless
transportation makes people
's life
easier because Fix the agreement mistake
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in
every occasion they do not need to ask a manual tour guide to take them to their destination.
Even though Change preposition
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driverless
car
is very convenient, however
, the price
is very expensive. We can see that in Indonesia there is still plenty of people
who use
it, sometimes it comes from the aristocracy who can afford it. The price
is still not friendly with most people
who have a standard salary. For instance
, my father prefer
to Change the verb form
prefers
use
a Japan
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Japanese
car
rather than Tesla
, an American Correct article usage
a Tesla
car
, because of the price
. If in the future driverless
cars will be
tightened, we can encourage the government to have Wrong verb form
are
a terms
of how Correct the article-noun agreement
terms
a term
people
with standard salary
can buy those things.
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salaries
To conclude
, driverless
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the driverless
a driverless
car
is very innovative to make
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in making
people
's life accessible and impactful. However
, the price
is very overpriced
and only suitable for Correct word choice
high
the
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apply
people
who have a
high power. In the future, we can collaborate with the governments on how to standardize the Remove the article
apply
price
for standard people
so driverless
cars will be
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use
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