In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, transformation technology is very massive in our lives. Some
people
say that all forms of
the
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transportation will be
driverless
in the upcoming life
which
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and
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people
become passengers inside these vehicles
whenever
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wherever
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they go. At
this
point, I can argue that there are a lot of advantages despite the drawbacks. The reason why
driverless
car
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cars
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have an advantage is because easy to
use
and comfortable for older
people
.
Furthermore
,
driverless
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car
is very suitable for
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majority of
people
who want to travel
with
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a
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far
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long
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distance and they do not want to ride alone because of tired.
For example
, my manager in the company
told
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that he
prefer
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to
use
a
driverless
car
whenever they have a trip with his family so he can have a break
while
on the road.
Additionally
,
driverless
transportation makes
people
's
life
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easier because
in
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on
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every occasion they do not need to ask a manual tour guide to take them to their destination. Even though
driverless
car
is very convenient,
however
, the
price
is very expensive. We can see that in Indonesia there is still plenty of
people
who
use
it, sometimes it comes from the aristocracy who can afford it. The
price
is still not friendly with most
people
who have a standard salary.
For instance
, my father
prefer
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to
use
a
Japan
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car
rather than
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a Tesla
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, an American
car
, because of the
price
. If in the future
driverless
cars
will be
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tightened, we can encourage the government to have
a terms
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of how
people
with standard
salary
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salaries
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can buy those things.
To conclude
,
driverless
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the driverless
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car
is very innovative
to make
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in making
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people
's life accessible and impactful.
However
, the
price
is very
overpriced
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high
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and only suitable for
the
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people
who have
a
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high power. In the future, we can collaborate with the governments on how to standardize the
price
for standard
people
so
driverless
cars will
be
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use
for everyone.
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