The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
The diagram illustrates the transformation process for
sugar
from sugar
cane.
Overall
, it is obvious that the production of sugar
consists of seven steps , which begin with growing the plants and last
with drying and cooling the sugar
.
First and foremost we notice that the first step
of the procedure is we wait for the growth of the sugar
canes for about 12 to 18 months. Then
, we continue with the harvesting step
which is accomplished in two ways , the first option is by truck and the second option is by hand cutting.
The third step
is crushing it works by putting the sugar
cane into the crusher machine and next we wait to extract the juice.
In addition
, we move forward to purifying the juice with a limestone filter tool and we go on to the evaporation step
which basically we heat the juice we hold on to become syrup, and after, that we separate the crystals from the syrup and wait for hour to dry and cool .Submitted by despinaiapona on
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