You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.
#minutes #month #programme #uk #head #course #participants #events #organiser #interest #role #information
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter about a possible opportunity to be a social events
organiser for our upcoming training programme in UK
.
As you know, we will be leaving soon Correct article usage
the UK
to
the UK for our training programme. I heard from one of my peers that the training organiser is looking for someone to be a social Change preposition
for
events
organiser. I am very much interested in volunteering for that role as I have previous experience in conducting social events
.
Although
, I know that our head of the course is looking for participants, I do not have much information related to the role as it has not been officially posted in
our department website.Change preposition
on
Therefore
, could you please give us more information such
as qualification and availability so that I can verify if I am eligible or not.
As I mentioned earlier, I have some experience in that role at my previous school and I was responsible for conducting all the social activities Change the punctuation
?
such
as games, and cultural events
. I was also
awarded a prize in
conducting the event successfully.
I hope you consider my interest and I am looking Change preposition
for
foward
to hearing a positive response.
Yours Faithfully,
RaghavCorrect your spelling
forward
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Task Response
Ensure to directly address all parts of the task. You've expressed your interest and requested more information well, but to further improve, make your experience relevant by detailing how it can benefit the role specifically.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use transitional phrases between paragraphs to guide your reader through your letter smoothly. Phrases like 'Furthermore,' 'In addition to,' or 'Moreover,' can help link your ideas more coherently.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use a range of sentence structures to demonstrate your language ability. While your letter is well-written, varying your sentence types further can enhance readability and demonstrate greater linguistic proficiency.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite