The provided table illustrates the milk production in a year in four countries (Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania, Guatemala) in 1990, 2000 and 2010

The provided table illustrates the milk production in a year in four countries (Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania, Guatemala) in 1990, 2000 and 2010
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The diagram above depicts the milk-producing statistics in 12 months in four countries, Netherlands, Australia,
Tanzania
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, and
Guatemala
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measured over 2 decades from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
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, Australia had one of the highest liters in the beginning and had the most significant decrease
while
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Tanzania
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and
Guatemala
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starting with the lowest points had doubled
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in 2 decades.
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with, in 1990 Australia’s farmers were making 11,2 million
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of milk per year and slightly decreased in 2000,
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dropping down to 9,2 million.
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, the level of the Netherlands and Australia contained the same numbers, but the first country had little increase in 20 years.
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, in developing countries
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as
Tanzania
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and
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milk farming was at the lowest rates.
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, in 1990 areas had 87 and 26 thousand milk making, respectively.
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, both countries had a rapid enhancement and peaked at 155 thousand and 84 thousand for
Tanzania
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and
Guatemala
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tanzania, guatemala with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • milk production
  • trends
  • economic development
  • growth rates
  • leading producer
  • technological advancements
  • policy changes
  • climatic conditions
  • global impact
  • dairy industry
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