The provided table illustrates the milk production in a year in four countries (Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania, Guatemala) in 1990, 2000 and 2010
The diagram above depicts the milk-producing statistics in 12 months in four countries, Netherlands, Australia,
Tanzania
, and Guatemala
measured over 2 decades from 1990 to 2010. Overall
, Australia had one of the highest liters in the beginning and had the most significant decrease while
Tanzania
and Guatemala
starting with the lowest points had doubled enhance
in 2 decades.
Wrong verb form
enhanced
To begin
with, in 1990 Australia’s farmers were making 11,2 million liters
of milk per year and slightly decreased in 2000, Change the spelling
litres
as a result
dropping down to 9,2 million. Conversely
, the level of the Netherlands and Australia contained the same numbers, but the first country had little increase in 20 years.
On the other hand
, in developing countries such
as Tanzania
and Guatemala
milk farming was at the lowest rates. Firstly
, in 1990 areas had 87 and 26 thousand milk making, respectively. Subsequently
, both countries had a rapid enhancement and peaked at 155 thousand and 84 thousand for Tanzania
and Guatemala
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