The provided table illustrates the milk production in a year in four countries (Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania, Guatemala) in 1990, 2000 and 2010
The diagram above depicts the milk-producing statistics in 12 months in four countries, Netherlands, Australia,
Tanzania
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Guatemala
measured over 2 decades from 1990 to 2010. Use synonyms
Overall
, Australia had one of the highest liters in the beginning and had the most significant decrease Linking Words
while
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Tanzania
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Guatemala
starting with the lowest points had doubled Use synonyms
enhance
in 2 decades.
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To begin
with, in 1990 Australia’s farmers were making 11,2 million Linking Words
liters
of milk per year and slightly decreased in 2000, Change the spelling
litres
as a result
dropping down to 9,2 million. Linking Words
Conversely
, the level of the Netherlands and Australia contained the same numbers, but the first country had little increase in 20 years.
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On the other hand
, in developing countries Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
Tanzania
and Use synonyms
Guatemala
milk farming was at the lowest rates. Use synonyms
Firstly
, in 1990 areas had 87 and 26 thousand milk making, respectively. Linking Words
Subsequently
, both countries had a rapid enhancement and peaked at 155 thousand and 84 thousand for Linking Words
Tanzania
and Use synonyms
Guatemala
.Use synonyms
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