The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009.

The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009.
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table chart depicts the income of secondary/ high school
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in five countries in 2009. It is clear from the graph that
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in Luxembourg get higher salaries throughout their careers.
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what is shown,
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in Australia and Denmark show the same pattern; in Australia, after 15
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, the salary will be 48,000, which is the maximum as well, and
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in Denmark are paid more than that by 6,000.
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in Japan and Korea start at 34,000 and 30,000, respectively, but in the end, the
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in Japan could get 86,000 after 37
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of teaching. In terms of Luxembourg, they start at 80,000 and after 15
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the salary will increase to 119,00 and to reach the maximum salary ( 132,000 ) they ought to work for 30
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words teachers, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • secondary/high school teachers
  • annual salary
  • gross income
  • net salary
  • cost of living
  • education funding
  • gender pay gap
  • teaching hours
  • years of experience
  • additional qualifications
  • economic indicators
  • average wage
  • currency conversion
  • educational disparities
  • international comparison
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