The pie chart below compare water usage in San Diego, California, Worldwide
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water expenditure in San Diego, California and Worldwide.
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Overall
, it is noticeable that the highest expenditure was on Linking Words
agriculture
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To begin
with San Diego, residential accounted for 60 % which is over four times bigger than Linking Words
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, in terms of residential, it had the largest proportion over the Linking Words
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, industry obtained only 23 %. In terms of California, there was a negligible difference Linking Words
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agriculture
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agriculture
accounted for 69 % which was the most popular
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Consequently
, residential obtained 8 % which is over two times smaller than industry, namely 23 %. Linking Words
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