The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant
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The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. They are the
USA
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,
Japan
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and
Sweden
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. In the
USA
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, between 1940 and 1960 we have a decrease of 5% at about 2%, and we have an
increase
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until 2040, with almost 30%. In the beginning,
Japan
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had an
increase
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until 1980 with 15% later a small decrease of about 2% in 2020 and
then
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we have an incredible
increase
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of 25%. In the end,
Sweden
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had an
increase
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until 1980 with 14% and
then
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an ups and downs period until 25%. As we see in 2040, the country with the most old people is the
USA
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, followed the
Sweden
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and
Japan
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.
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, between 1980 and 2020 in
USA
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had a decrease
while
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Sweden
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and
Japan
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had an
increase
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,
this
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says that it depends on the territory and the nation.
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