The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant
The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. They are the
USA
,
Japan
and
Sweden
. In the
USA
, between 1940 and 1960 we have a decrease of 5% at about 2%, and we have an
increase
until 2040, with almost 30%. In the beginning,
Japan
had an
increase
until 1980 with 15% later a small decrease of about 2% in 2020 and
then
we have an incredible
increase
of 25%. In the end,
Sweden
had an
increase
until 1980 with 14% and
then
an ups and downs period until 25%. As we see in 2040, the country with the most old people is the
USA
, followed the
Sweden
and
Japan
.
For instance
, between 1980 and 2020 in
USA
had a decrease
while
Sweden
and
Japan
had an
increase
,
this
says that it depends on the territory and the nation.
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