The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant
The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. They are the
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Japan
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Sweden
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, between 1940 and 1960 we have a decrease of 5% at about 2%, and we have an Use synonyms
increase
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Japan
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increase
of 25%.
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Sweden
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then
an ups and downs period until 25%. As we see in 2040, the country with the most old people is the Linking Words
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Sweden
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Japan
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