The graph shows the information about international conferences in 3 capital cities in 1980-2010. Summarize the information and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the recycling
rate
for various types of selected materials in a certain country over a 28-year period
.
Overall
, it is obvious that while
paper and
cardboard and Correct word choice
apply
also
glass containers were by far the most recycled materials over the Rephrase
apply
period
in question, aluminum
cans and plastics were the least recycled. Moreover
, the recycling rate
of aluminum
cans increased dramatically in the interval shown.
In 1982, paper and cardboard which had the highest recycling Change the spelling
aluminium
rate
in the mentioned years, started recycling at about 65%. This
figure had some fluctuation before reaching a peak of 80% in 1994 and then
decreased steadily by 2010. In addition
, glass containers which had the second most of recycling proportion, began to be recycled at 50% in 1982 and after a little drop in1990
, rose gradually for the rest of the Change preposition
in in1990
period
.
On the other hand
, aluminum
cans and plastics were not recycled until 1986 and 1990, respectively and the Change the spelling
aluminium
rate
of both of them were
under 5%. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
While
Aluminum
cans’ recycling rate
climbed rapidly to around 45% by 2010, the recycling rate
of plastics rose negligibly by the end of the period
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