The graph shows the information about international conferences in 3 capital cities in 1980-2010. Summarize the information and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the information about international conferences in 3 capital cities in 1980-2010. Summarize the information and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the recycling
rate
for various types of selected materials in a certain country over a 28-year
period
.
Overall
, it is obvious that
while
paper
and
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cardboard and
also
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glass containers were by far the most recycled materials over the
period
in question,
aluminum
cans and plastics were the least recycled.
Moreover
, the recycling
rate
of
aluminum
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cans increased dramatically in the interval shown. In 1982, paper and cardboard which had the highest recycling
rate
in the mentioned years, started recycling at about 65%.
This
figure had some fluctuation before reaching a peak of 80% in 1994 and
then
decreased steadily by 2010.
In addition
, glass containers which had the second most of recycling proportion, began to be recycled at 50% in 1982 and after a little drop
in1990
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, rose gradually for the rest of the
period
.
On the other hand
,
aluminum
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aluminium
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cans and plastics were not recycled until 1986 and 1990, respectively and the
rate
of both of them
were
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under 5%.
While
Aluminum
cans’ recycling
rate
climbed rapidly to around 45% by 2010, the recycling
rate
of plastics rose negligibly by the end of the
period
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, period, aluminum with synonyms.
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