The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019
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The given two charts illustrate the variations in washing machines, refrigerators and vacuum cleaners in a provided country in the years 1920 to 2019, and the other chart shows the time spent on housework.
Overall
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, washing machines and refrigerator ownership grew drastically and became stable
while
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, vacuum cleaners Increased slowly over the period
furthermore
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. the number of working hours had a downward trend from 1920 to 2019
To begin
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with, by 1920, washing machines held the highest percentage was 40%. and It was growing slowly to reach 60%. In 1960, after which had Steady development up to the year 2019, vacuum cleaners and refrigerator ownership started at 30% and zero respectively which rocketed sharply to the peak level of 100% in 2000 and continued up to 2019.
However
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, the use of electronic devices by a family plummeted from 50% in the year 1920 to 10% in 2019.
Finally
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,
although
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the old generation preferred to use devices for housework, the modern era does not use them.
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Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • housework
  • time frame
  • variables
  • trends
  • significant milestones
  • turning points
  • correlation
  • reduction
  • influenced
  • societal implications
  • quality of life
  • gender roles
  • economic implications
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