Imagine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called "the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people.

Dear sir, I am Ashif Nawaz, and I am writing
this
letter to express my interest in writing an article called "The
Book
That Influenced Me Mostbook that influenced me most" in your
magazine
. As a regular reader of your
magazine
, I do not want to miss the opportunity to contribute to the next volume of the
magazine
. I am very eager to share the autobiography of Sheikh Mujibur Rahman, father of the Bengali nation.
This
particular
book
not only provides information about the liberation war of Bangladesh but
also
influences people to love their country.
Initially
, I bought
this
book
to learn about the liberation war but after reading several pages I got to know about the philosophy of the father of nation which influenced me a lot to do something for my country. The writing style of that autobiography was so straightforward that no effort was needed to understand everything. I believe that
this
autobiography of Sheikh Mujibur Rahman would certainly influence many other people like me. Regardless of political factors,
this
book
can be used to demonstrate what a person can do to defend his country. So, I
therefore
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, pray and hope that you will be kind enough to consider my article for your
magazine
so that people can learn about the
book
. Thank you so much for your valuable time. Yours faithfully, Ashif Nawaz.
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task response
The letter effectively addresses the task requirements by describing the chosen book and explaining its influence. The ideas are well-developed and relevant to the task.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are polite and appropriate for a formal letter. However, some improvements can be made in organizing the ideas within the paragraphs for better coherence and cohesion.

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