The bar chart below shows number of seals, whales, and dolphins recorded in the gormez straits from to 2006 to 2018

The bar chart below shows number of seals, whales, and dolphins recorded in the gormez straits from to 2006 to 2018
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The bar graph illustrates the
population
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of Sea mammals listed in the Gormez Straits in the years between 2006 and 2018.
Overall
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, the dolphin
population
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recorded the highest
at the end
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of the period.
While
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. Whales are the lowest in numbers. As per the bar graph, Seals count was the higher in 2006.
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, it decreased in 2010 by about 10.
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, the community slightly rose in 2014 almost 6 and they increased their
population
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throughout the
year
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and reached 45 in the
year
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2018.
On the other hand
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, the Whales and Dolphin
population
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did not have much difference in 2006 it was approximately 22 and 18.
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, the Dolphin group dramatically grew over the
year
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and became the most populated aquatic in 2018 about 52.
However
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, the Whales group dropped down throughout the
year
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and they were the
last
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number in the Gormez Straits.
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