The graph show changes in spending habits of people in thw uk between 1971 and 2001.

The graph show changes in spending habits of people in thw uk between 1971 and 2001.
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The pie charts above demonstrate the changes in spending habits of UK residents from 1971 to 2001.
Overall
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, over the period, the leading sectors of
expenditure
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during the period were
Food
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, and
Cars
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,
although
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there was a role change in the leading position in 2001. Spending on
Cars
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, from the second position in 1971, became the highest figure in 2001
while
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the spending on
food
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took second place. Other than that, there were increments in most of the examined sectors. In general, there were significant changes in the UK people's spending habits. In 1971, the majority of spending was on
food
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, with a proportion of 44%, followed by
Cars
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and Petrol, at 22% and 10% respectively. The percentages of
expenditure
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for Restaurants, Furniture, and Books were respectively 9%, 7%, and 6%.
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the data, the UK people spent the least on Computers in the year, at 2%. In 2001, the proportion of car
expenditure
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rose sharply from 22% to 43% and accounted for the leading figure
whereas
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that for
Food
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experienced a dramatic fall of 30%, from 44% to 14%. There were moderate increases in the proportion of
expenditure
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for Restaurants, and Computers, at 14% and 12% respectively. Weak decreases were seen in the figures for Petrol, and Furnitures, by 1% to 2%, and the lowest
expenditure
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was for Books at 1%. In conclusion, the spending majorities were on
Food
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and
Cars
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,
however
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, there were
also
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slight changes in each sector.
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