In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the population in the

countryside

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in many countries is going down because they are migrating massively into the

city

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. In

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essay, I will discuss the positive effects of these situations.

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, the huge number of

people

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who moved to the

city

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,

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is improving their skills and

knowledge

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to be better in

work

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the work

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field. The lack of education in the

countryside

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might be outdated and less of

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expert who contributes in the village

instead

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of in the

city

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.

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, there are many experts at work living in the

city

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,

both

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local and international experts. They have the capability to teach

both

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skill and

knowledge

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.

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, it is easy for us to learn from the experts which effect to reduces the cost of study.

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, these capabilities might be easy to transfer to the next

generation

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in the village area. It is one way of solving to transfer

knowledge

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rapidly to close the gap

lack

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of

both

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skill and

knowledge

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.

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, living in the

city

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brings more of an issue regarding transferring cultural

knowledge

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to the next

generation

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. A lot of

culture

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needs to be protected to

keep

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exist in the future. It might be one of the resources to grow the economic level in the

countryside

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.

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, the

balinese

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dance still exists now.

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local and international tourists enjoy watching these attractions.

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is because there is a transfer of

knowledge

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and skill from the elderly to the next

generation

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.

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,

this

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culture

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already become one of the income for the rural

people

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in Bali.

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, the huge number of

people

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who migrate to the

city

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positively affects the

countryside

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. They can improve skills and

knowledge

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which is more expert in the work field who stay in the

city

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.

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, the village

culture

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has to keep

exist

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in the future by the next

generation

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. Some of the

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culture

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cultures

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might create income for local

people

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.