In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the population in the

countryside

in many countries is going down because they are migrating massively into the

city

. In

this

essay, I will discuss the positive effects of these situations.

To begin

, the huge number of

people

who moved to the

city

,

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is improving their skills and

knowledge

to be better in

work

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field. The lack of education in the

countryside

might be outdated and less of

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expert who contributes in the village

instead

of in the

city

.

Moreover

, there are many experts at work living in the

city

,

both

local and international experts. They have the capability to teach

both

skill and

knowledge

.

Therefore

, it is easy for us to learn from the experts which effect to reduces the cost of study.

In addition

, these capabilities might be easy to transfer to the next

generation

in the village area. It is one way of solving to transfer

knowledge

rapidly to close the gap

lack

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of

both

skill and

knowledge

.

On the other hand

, living in the

city

brings more of an issue regarding transferring cultural

knowledge

to the next

generation

. A lot of

culture

needs to be protected to

keep

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exist in the future. It might be one of the resources to grow the economic level in the

countryside

.

For instance

, the

balinese

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dance still exists now.

Both

local and international tourists enjoy watching these attractions.

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is because there is a transfer of

knowledge

and skill from the elderly to the next

generation

.

Moreover

,

this

culture

already become one of the income for the rural

people

in Bali.

To conclude

, the huge number of

people

who migrate to the

city

positively affects the

countryside

. They can improve skills and

knowledge

which is more expert in the work field who stay in the

city

.

On the contrary

, the village

culture

has to keep

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in the future by the next

generation

. Some of the

culture

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might create income for local

people

.