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you ordered a book online for exam preperation. It has been sometime since you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce compnany about this. Describe your purchase order of the book explain the importance of the book Say what you want the company to do for you

#book #exam #preperation #e-commerce #compnany #purchase #importance #company
Dear Sir,
This
 is to inform you of an unexpected situation that compelled me to write
this
 letter. I have recently purchased a
book
 namely, "Quantitative Aptitude By RS Agarwal" , from your esteemed e-commerce website. The order ID of the
book
 is 123789 and it
was suppose
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 to arrive at my address within 3 days from the booking date.
However
,
this
book
 has not arrived and it is hampering my
day to day
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day-to-day
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 activities. As for me, I am a
fourth year
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 college student and I need
this
book
 to prepare for various entrance exams.
Moreover
, next month I have an exam and I need
this
book
 to complete my preparation.
This
 entire situation is very frustrating, as my success depends on the completion of
this
book
. I would request the company to deliver me
this
book
 as soon as possible.
Additionally
, I can collect the
book
 from the nearest delivery point , provided it is near my home.
This
 would help me start my
preperation
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preparation
 at the earliest and perform well. I have entrusted
this
 matter to your kind attention, I believe you
would
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 take the necessary action. Yours Sincerely, Shreyashi
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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