The chart above shows the number of homes built between 2000 and 2009 in two cities, Derby and Nottingham.
The bar graph indicates how house numbers constructed over a 10-year period, starting from 2000 changed in two different cities.
Overall
it can be seen that the number
of homes gradually increased in Derby
whereas
the city named Nottingham witnessed fluctuating results over the following years.
Looking at the data sets in Derby
in detail it is clear that
in 2000, nearly 48 buildings were built which remained the same up to 2001. However
, the number
of homes slightly went up from 80 in 2002 to 120 in 2003 and this
number
stayed constant until 2007. Furthermore
, amount of residential buildings in 2008 was about 270 compared to higher than the time between 2000 and 2007. Finally
, Derby
experienced the maximum result in 2009 accounting for approximately 340.
Turning to the information sets in Nottingham in more detail it is evident that home numbers stood at around 50 in 2000 and slowly rose to 55 in 2001. In contrast
, residential building numbers suddenly fell around 20 in 2002, but these amounts consequently
climbed up to 2005. Again the number
of apartments underwent fluctuating evidence from 2006 to 2008. Lastly
, Nottingham finished at 250 homes in 2009 which was comparatively less than Derby
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