The chart below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances anf amount of time spent doing house work in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
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The ownership of electrical appliances has changed dramatically from 1920 to 2019. Washing machines changed the least, from 40
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in 2019, which is about 35 Change the spelling
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over almost 100 years. Vacuum cleaners rose from 30 Change the spelling
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in 1920 to 100 percent
in 2000, and stayed the same since then
. The percentage of refrigerators with electrical appliances increased most drastically, from 0 percent
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in just 60 years. Change the spelling
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washing machines with electrical appliances are only at 75 percent
in 2019, both refrigerators and vacuum cleaners are at 100 Change the spelling
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. That explains why the number of hours of housework per week per household decreased by almost 40 Change the spelling
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, from 50 Change the spelling
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in 1920 to just 10 Change the spelling
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in 2019. With the help of technology, people don't have to spend too much time doing household chores like washing clothes, preparing meals, or cleaning anymore.Change the spelling
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