The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.

The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.
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The line graph illustrates the
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amount
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number
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of consumed spreads (
margarine
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,
butter
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, low fat and reduced spreads) between 1981 and 2007. The units are measured in grams.
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, it is noticeable that
butter
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was the highest consumed spread in 1981, which was replaced by
margarine
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from 1991 to 2001.
Moreover
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, the consumption of
butter
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and
margarine
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decreased over the period in question,
while
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that of fat and reduced spreads increased becoming the most popular spread in the final
years
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. At the beginning of the period, the
amount
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of consumed
butter
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was just over 140 before reaching a peak of 160 in 1986, whilst the consumption of
margarine
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went down slightly from 90 to 80.
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, the figure for
margarine
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rose significantly to 100 in 1991 before levelling out during the next 5
years
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,
whereas
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the
amount
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of eaten
butter
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declined dramatically to 70. In 2007, the
amount
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of used
butter
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dropped considerably to 50,
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, that of consumed
margarine
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fell remarkably to 40 becoming the lowest used spread. With regards to the consumption of low fat and reduced spreads, it began in 1996 and accounted for about 10. 5
years
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later, the figure rose sharply to just over 80 before falling negligibly to 70 in the final
years
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, margarine, butter, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • spreads
  • increased
  • decreased
  • stable
  • significantly
  • approximately
  • per capita
  • remarkable
  • peaked
  • experienced
  • started
  • remained
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