2.The graph below shows the changes in production (millions) of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

2.The graph below shows the changes in production (millions) of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line chart below displays the fluctuation in the creation of suits, dresses and coats in a cloth factory between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, the manufacturing of coats increased significantly over the entire time period. Suits’ production fluctuated considerably and the fabrication of dresses slightly varied. The coats had the lowest
overall
at the start of the period with just around 7
million
creations but steadily increased to approximately 23
million
in 2005, becoming the most fabricated product and during the next 5 years grew slightly to 25
million
maintaining its first place. The manufacturing of suits was the most created during the first year with 15
million
and increased sharply to around 23
million
, but
then
between 1996 and 2005 it dropped dramatically to just over 15
million
and in the
last
five years grew to little under 20
million
. Dresses were the second most manufactured product in 1990, until 1995
this
product moderately climbed to nearly 13
million
,
then
it dropped to just over 10
million
in 2000, and during the
last
10 years it rose gradually to 15
million
becoming the least produced
at the end
of the period.
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