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Some people claim that recycling is not very effective since most waste still ends up in landfills. They say that instead of recycling, we should focus on using fewer resources to minimise the amount of waste we create. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Recycling is a popular and widely accepted practice that has been promoted as a way to reduce
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 and protect the environment.
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, some people argue that recycling is not very effective because most
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 still ends up in landfills. They suggest that
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 of recycling, we should focus on using fewer resources to minimize the amount of
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 we create 1.
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 it is true that recycling has its limitations, it is still an important part of the solution to our
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 problem. Recycling can help reduce the amount of
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 sent to landfills and incinerators, conserve natural resources
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 as timber, water, and minerals,
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prevent pollution and reduce greenhouse gases by reducing the need to mine and process new raw materials 23. Recycling
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 has economic benefits
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 as creating jobs and generating revenue 4.
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, it is important to note that recycling alone is not enough to solve our
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 problem. We need to adopt a more comprehensive approach that includes reducing
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 at the source, reusing products, and recycling materials that cannot be reduced or reused 5. By using fewer resources and minimizing
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, we can reduce our environmental impact and create a more sustainable future. In conclusion,
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 recycling may not be a perfect solution, it is still an important part of the solution to our
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 problem. We should continue to recycle
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also
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 focusing on reducing
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 at the source and reusing products whenever possible.
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Your essay provides a clear and comprehensive response to the task, addressing the issue of recycling, effectiveness, and the alternative approach of using fewer resources.
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The essay demonstrates good coherence and cohesion, with a logical structure that includes an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. The ideas are well-connected and supported throughout the essay.

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