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You are planning to travel and would like someone to take care of your apartment while you are away. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter •explain why you will be away •ask your friend to take care of your apartment •describe the tasks you want your friend to do

#travel #someone #care #apartment #friend #•explain #•ask #•describe #tasks
Dear Maxwell Warm wishes ! I hope that everything is fine and well on your end. I am writing
this
 to inform you and ask for a favour. As I am touring Australia starting from October 15, for a business opportunity for a month, I would want you to stay at my place .You are the only one who could do
this
 for me because I trust you blindly. As you are well aware my wedding is going to take place in January ,
hence
, shutting the home is not admirable. My home helper will be visiting daily to keep it dust-free,
also
 an interior designer will be there on October 28 to make some changes .I have spoken to him and he agreed to work in my absence under the scrutiny of my closest associate.
Hence
 , to keep the apartment in good health it needs to stay open. Would you accept my proposal?
Moreover
 ,it will be easier for you to operate from here as it is well equipped with the facilities like Internet. I am keen to hear a nod from you. Warm regards. Yours truly Maddie Parker
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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